Peaceful yet exciting, Fresh but polluted, Learning yet never knowing, some things.
Isa, I thought that did a really good jod on your poem ,and because I could feel the words in me.What do you mean about never knowing?
Tori
I loved your poem a lot, I think short poems are good.
Isa I think you need to rhyme a little more because it didn't sound rhymey to me.
From:Aubrielle
I liked your poem Isa.What did you mean when you said "some things"?I think you could have put some more onto your poem.
I like the paluted part, why did you com paire, put a little mor pazaz
Peacful poem
Isa, I thought that did a really good jod on your poem ,and because I could feel the words in me.What do you mean about never knowing?
Tori
Wonderful
I loved your poem a lot, I think short poems are good.
Isa's peom
Isa I think you need to
rhyme a little more
because it didn't sound
rhymey to me.
From:Aubrielle
P.Q.S
I liked your poem Isa.What did you mean when you said "some things"?I think you could have put some more onto your poem.
Isa
I like the paluted part, why did you com paire, put a little mor pazaz