Submitted by Anonymous on November 9, 2007 - 10:19am.
You gotta adapt or die!
No matter what you need
You gotta Adapt or die
Whether its long legs hollow bones or wings that fly
You might want to run faster go further
No matter what you need
Adapt or die.
Submitted by BC (not verified) on December 5, 2007 - 8:56pm.
no elliot i do not want to work on rhymes and i happend to know that your poem does not rhyme. adapt or die came into my head because it was the last game we played and i wrote during solitude and reflection at white ranch open space.
Submitted by Elliot on November 26, 2007 - 5:55pm.
Hey I really liked your poem. I liked the fact that you made it into a song. I have one question why did adapt or die come to your mind. You might want to work on the rhymes, but thats only me.
no elliot i do not want to
no elliot i do not want to work on rhymes and i happend to know that your poem does not rhyme. adapt or die came into my head because it was the last game we played and i wrote during solitude and reflection at white ranch open space.
comment!!!
B.C I like how instead of a poem you made a song i like that its funny and also talking about what happens when you don't adapt!!!!!
(-: Dallas
thanks dallas
hey dallas thanks for the great praise about the song and about the adapt part.
awsome poem
I liked the song but you need too work on the rhyming,but that is up too you!
Every Poem...
Every poem doesn't have to rhyme. But that was an excellent suggestion. Does your poem rhyme?
pqs
like how you wrote a song and wrote about a game.why did you write a song?great poem.
well charlie i wrote a song
well charlie i wrote a song because i realy enjoyed that game and could not seem to make a poem out of it.
Adapt or die
I liked how your poem rimed. Why did you make it about adapt or die? I agree with Kyle about how you should tell the reader about you're experience.
thanks
great comment and i actully did try that but it would not fit in with the poem.
B.C's poem
I liked how you picked adapt or die
thats cool.
Aubrielle
thanks
yea i do think that adapt or die was a good game to write about thanks for the praise.
BC's poem
I liked your poem a lot but I think you need to tell more about your experience there.
actully Kyle i did try to
actully Kyle i did try to write about my experience but it did not fit with the rest of the poem. thanks.
adapt or die by BC
I think it is phanominal that you said how much fun you had, why did you do it on adapt or die,i don't hav a sagashtion. P.S. thanks
i wrote about adapt or die
i wrote about adapt or die because i had alot of fun with that game.
Good poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I thought this poem was awesome!!!!!!!!!! I think that you were literally a poet. this was 1 of the best ones iI have seen.
Hey great poem
Hey I really liked your poem. I liked the fact that you made it into a song. I have one question why did adapt or die come to your mind. You might want to work on the rhymes, but thats only me.