THE GREATEST TRIP OF MY LIFE!!!
This is something I would like to say about our fun but hard camping trip, where we learned to be a better crew, here are some stuff we accomplished and still need to work on. These are some crew communities that we still need to work on. We should really have personal business stay at home because this is not all a social time, for example it's not time to talk about stuff that can stay at home like "I want to play my xbox," you should think of what fun things you can do at the camp site. After hearing something we need to work on let’s talk about crew community we have accomplished. For example I think when we got to our tent groups people where very supportive when people in there tent got home sick. I personally like to end on a happy note. Like I thought we were really supportive at all times some one needed help. Like I said we were really supportive, which leads me to my next paragraph on my favorites.
“Wow the dunes, choice time, midget roll, seeing Keyin and Triston get scared, it was all great, and I want to tell you more specifically about these awesome times I had on the trip. I and 12 other people including 3 girls where hyped and ready to climb high dune. As we got closer and closer to the top, we got closer to the sun, so that meant the sand was sizzling, but once we got up to high dune we all felt good to get up to high dune, and we felt good of each other. When we were at the dunes we where on a big hill and that is were the midget roll was invented. How the midget roll works is I tuck my legs into my shirt and I roll down the dunes at 98 m.p.h, or so it seems. Last, I like this one a lot because it’s funny and I like funny. What happened was when Keyin, Triston and I Went to the bathroom, and when we were done Keyin and Triston both came out and a whole group of girls screamed and Keyin and Triston were scared out of there skin. All of these were great and maybe someone like you or maybe even you will experience the time I had.
The dunes were great and very fun, but something just exciting was the nature, which included animals, trees and other parts of our environment. While climbing the dunes we saw amazing insects that amused us all. On the long hike up the dune I spotted a dead camel cricket, then not to long later Elliot spotted a living camel cricket it was awesome. After going to the dunes we went on a ranger hike, where we learned more about nature. After both groups were finished one of the rangers showed us a salamander and they called her SALLY-MANDER. What I thought was really cool even though I didn’t see one was a TIGER BEETLE. The rangers said that Tiger beetles are only found at the sand dunes, and I thought that was really cool. I hope you liked my paragraph on the great world of nature.




cool
Dallas I think that was the best camping reflection.
Dallas
Dallas your paragraph was really, really good. What I noticed was that at the beginning you were having a hard time making your sentences. But other than that it was awesome. Keep up the great work. P.s. Salleymander was really cool.
You did so good!
I think that there is nothing to change on this. My favorite thing that you wrote about is the part abbout your favorites. I think I like the part when you wrote about midget rolls and when keyin and triston got scared when they walker out of the bathroom. I also really liked your power statment for the paart about nature. You such a good job.
From,
Shannon.
Great!
I think your reflection was great. I liked how discriptive you were about High Dune and the midget roll.
Awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! liked every thing
I think that you did an graet job on your power stament and I liked how much detele you put in every paragraph. My most favorite paragraph was your favorite activedy one. It had all kinds of funny things like the bathroom thing with Triston and Keyin got scared. I thought that your camping reflection was AWSOME.
From.Zoya
yeah
that was great it wwas super detailed.why were you so quick to talk about the sallymander? and i would add more to the sallymander part.
Hi
what up home- sckilit -biscet. Nice job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good job!I liked everything.
Good job!I liked everything.
Good job!I liked everything.
Good job!I liked everything.