camping reflection

It was hard to build are crew community but we did it anyway. Here are some of the things that we did to help. One of the things that helped build our crew community was when we helped each other when we were home sick or not feeling good. Another thing was when we almost half of the crew built statue out of sticks we had to work together to build it. On the first day a group of about 5 or 6 people almost went to the high dune. It helped build our crew community because we had to help each other get up the dunes. Those were some of the things that helped us build our crew community.

I learned that there was a lot more nature than I expected at the sand dumes. Here are some of the things I learned and saw. One of the things I saw and learned about was a salamander. I learned that every time it rains all the salamanders go on the sand dunes to play, but when it stops they dig down to moist sand. Another thing that I saw was a back of deer ever morning at the same place at the same time. The mother deer would talk to the baby deer it was really cool. On the second day we went on a hike with 2 rangers. We learned how to identify trees by there leaves and stems. It was fun to see all the animals and nature.

We did a lot of awesome fun activities on the trip. Here are some of my favorite ones. One of my favorite activities was going to the creek. It was fun because we went on a hike and the street cut through the creek so the water went over the street. My next favorite activity was having free time. it wasfun because I got to read in the big tree's. last but not least my most favorite one was making my pooh bear dance some disco in the bus it was fun. Well I hope you enjoyed me camping reflection

My Poll: 
What was your favorite place to go?
sand dunes
100% (8 votes)
Reading
0% (0 votes)
Naping
0% (0 votes)
Choice time
0% (0 votes)
Hiking
0% (0 votes)
Total votes: 8
3.25
Average: 3.3 (4 votes)

wow!!

Hey Zoya,

I enjoyed reading the favorites paragraph the most. I liked how you included pooh in the favorites. I think you need to do C.O.P.S. a little bit better. What did you mean by "a salamander"? Do you mean Sally the salamander?

Estela,

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that was awesome!!!

Zoya that was great I think you should have checked your C.O.P.S. better.

Zoya

Zoya I think your camping reflection was really good. You talked about everything. I think you really understood this asignment.

Lots of things to say

Zoya I think that you had lots and lots to say. I loved how you talked about the making pooh dance on the bus because that was the best thing that happend on the bus. I have one question though, how come you chose to write about pooh insted of making the artwork. I think that the way you did your power statment for your favorite things on the camping trip was very good. Last thing I think that you should have done C.O.P.S. a little better. I think that you did the best writing on this.

From Shannon

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