my camping adventure reflection!!!
This is my paragraph of a fun but difficult camping trip. Playing with each other helps me and other grow a great community and a crew. I hope our crew grows like a flower and a healthy one. When we went on the camping trip communication was important to create a great community and a strong one, and without communication we won’t talk and enjoy ourselves. When we got to the camp I made a new friend. I know friendship is a strong part of a good crew, so that everyone has a great year.
In our last paragraph it was about crew community, this paragraph it about my favorites. First is the campfire. I enjoyed watching the talents the crew showed, the marshmallow roasting and the stories. When we had a choice to go to high dune or stay at the river, I choose to go to high dune and I did. We hiked high dunes and our rewards were the beautiful view and a heck of a ride down. The second time we went down to the dunes we found a super steep dune and I went down and had fun and rolled down the dune. I love doing migitrolls, stumbling, rolling and high jumps.
Leafs changing, weather changing, season changing all I talk about is nature. The first nature product is insects. There are Tiger beetles that are found nowhere in the world but the sand dunes, camel crickets and even more bugs. At the campsite we saw deer near the bathrooms in the morning. There were two adults and five little ones. Once one of the deer were talking about something. When we went to the nature hike we learned about the history of the sand dunes and the kinds of life there like we learned the settlers used plants for rubber and food.
I hope you enjoyed my adventure!




You did great!
Estela I think that you did a great job on riting your camping reflection. The thing that I liked the most was the part about the nature. I think that you did a very good job on you power statment. All of the deatale that you put into that part I thuoght was so good. One question thuogh how come on your power statment for your first part you put in the word paragraph so many times. I think that you should have not added that in so many times, and in the second part you put in and way to many times. Except for that I think that you did a very good no even better, great gob on it.
From,
Shannon.
thanks Shannon
Thanks Shannon for your advise but, I like the way it is.Thanks Shannon for the comment.
from,
Estela
That was COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
I thougth that it was very good. I thougth that it was very rave of you to go to the high dune. Iwas such of a pussy to go. I have one qestoin for you what was your favorite thing to do down the dune?like I said it whas COOOOOOOOOOOOOl.
From.Zoya
hey Zoya
Thanks Zoya for the advise and I mit do it later. thank you Zoya so much for the comment.
from,
Estela